Comments for the Chimera Triangles

Comment on Part One; Chapter One.4 by admin

admin — Sun, 19 Jul 2009 23:28:04 +0000

in fact, i did base a certain character on certain aspects of you when we met back in 2003, but her character isn’t really in detail till later chapters na… can you guess who?

Comment on Part One; Chapter One.4 by Rhyta B.

Rhyta B. — Fri, 17 Jul 2009 03:53:33 +0000

i think u r going to write about my story eiei

Comment on Part One; Chapter Three.2 by Klaus

Klaus — Fri, 17 Jul 2009 03:48:39 +0000

Even something as mundane as arriving at an airport captures the reader’s imagination and hold it. Marvelous characters.

Finish it and sell it. It is 1000 percent better than what is on the shelves in Thailand.

Comment on Part One: Chapter One.1 by Klaus Kent

Klaus Kent — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 14:32:16 +0000

Excellent descriptive ability. The meter and vocabulary are blended seamlessly. The book literally jumps from the pages.

Comment on Part One: Chapter One.1 by admin

admin — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 08:07:01 +0000

thanks for all the comments hope to read more to keep momentum and motivation going for this work
@ rhyta–I’ve yet to realize how good a writer I shall become

Comment on Part One; Chapter One.3 by Rhyta B.

Rhyta B. — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 07:38:24 +0000

555 is this a real story?

Comment on Part One; Chapter One.2 by Rhyta B.

Rhyta B. — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 07:32:51 +0000

ummmm no comments

Comment on Part One: Chapter One.1 by Rhyta B.

Rhyta B. — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 07:23:59 +0000

wow how come you bacame a good writer huh?

Comment on Part One: Chapter One.1 by khawar

khawar — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 06:06:14 +0000

It is very well written, a good use of vocabulary, making it sophisticatedly interesting but also has the charm of humour aswell; in reference to the above comment I also felt the urge to keep reading which is a sign of a good novel.

Comment on Part One: Chapter One.1 by blovel troll

blovel troll — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 06:02:36 +0000

PMS Pam!! hahaha, i can jusy picture her…great stuff

Comment on Part One: Chapter Two.1 by admin

admin — Sun, 12 Jul 2009 04:27:39 +0000

i guess that is the art of suspense–to always keep readers guessing:)

Comment on Part One: Chapter Two.1 by Craig Phillipson

Craig Phillipson — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 00:09:41 +0000

Flashback! The tone and the style are definitely different from the first chapter, but still good- i’m interested to see what’ll happen next. After reading the first chapter I expected a story about Chris dealing with his demons in the present, but its cool that you went back into the past- there’s this sense of a fresh start coupled with a sense of dread about what will go wrong.

Comment on Part One: Chapter One.1 by Craig

Craig — Tue, 02 Jun 2009 23:55:12 +0000

I enjoyed it- it’s funny and well written, a solid introduction to your main character, and left me with a strong impetus to keep reading