Comments on: Part One: Chapter One.1

By: Klaus Kent

Klaus Kent — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 14:32:16 +0000

Excellent descriptive ability. The meter and vocabulary are blended seamlessly. The book literally jumps from the pages.

By: admin

admin — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 08:07:01 +0000

thanks for all the comments hope to read more to keep momentum and motivation going for this work
@ rhyta–I’ve yet to realize how good a writer I shall become

By: Rhyta B.

Rhyta B. — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 07:23:59 +0000

wow how come you bacame a good writer huh?

By: khawar

khawar — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 06:06:14 +0000

It is very well written, a good use of vocabulary, making it sophisticatedly interesting but also has the charm of humour aswell; in reference to the above comment I also felt the urge to keep reading which is a sign of a good novel.

By: blovel troll

blovel troll — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 06:02:36 +0000

PMS Pam!! hahaha, i can jusy picture her…great stuff

By: Craig

Craig — Tue, 02 Jun 2009 23:55:12 +0000

I enjoyed it- it’s funny and well written, a solid introduction to your main character, and left me with a strong impetus to keep reading